Question

【题目】假定你是李华，上个月Professor Smith曾推荐你去芝加哥大学(Chicago University)深造学习，现在你已被该大学录取。请你给Professor Smith写一封e-mail，表达对他的感激之情。主要内容：

1. 表达感激；

2. 描述Professor Smith提供的帮助；

3. 表示会努力学习以回报老师的帮助。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Professor Smith,

I am writing to______________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________

Best wishes!

Yours truly,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Professor Smith,

I am writing to express my sincere gratitude to you. Had it not for your help, I wouldn’t have become a student of the famous university---Chicago University.

Last month when I applied to Chicago University for my further education, you really gave me your kindest help. Firstly, you added greatly to my convenience by writing a recommendation for me to your former colleague who works in Chicago University. Besides, it was very nice of you to instruct me how to go through the application process.

Everyone agrees that it was you who made me gain this valuable opportunity of further education. From now on, I will study hard to make good grades in return for your sincere and generous help.

Best wishes!

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于提纲类短文，要求考生以李华的身份给Professor Smith写一封e-mail，表达对他的感激之情。所以文章使用一、二人称以及一般过去时为主的时态。要点：1. 上个月Professor Smith曾推荐你去芝加哥大学(Chicago University)深造学习，现在你已被该大学录取。2. 表达感激；3.描述Professor Smith提供的帮助；4.表示会努力学习以回报老师的帮助。建议文章分为三段，第一部分告知对方自己已经被录取并表示感谢。第二部分描述对方的帮助。第三部分表示会努力学习回报老师的帮助。本文的要点并不多，可以在第二部分中做适当的发挥。