IV.短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加. 删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧ ) .并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉.修改:在错的词下画一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:1. 每处错误及修改� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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IV.短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧ ) ，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

My classmate Liu Hong is an warm-hearted girl. She is good at studying,dancing and playing piano. After hear Sichuan earthquake,she felt very sad about it. She decided to do something to helping Sichuan people. First she calls her friends up and came up with having a benefit show. Then she handed out advertisement with her friends or put up signs asking people to watch. Luckily,she did very good. A lot of people were moved and gave their hands to Sichuan people. At the last,she raised 5,000 yuan. She gave up all the money to the quake-hit areas.

IV. My classmate Liu Hong is an (a) warm-hearted girl. She is good at studying,dancing and playing (∧the) piano. After hear (hearing) Sichuan earthquake,she felt very sad about it. She decided to do something to helping Sichuan people. First she help calls (called) her friends up and came up with having a benefit show. Then she handed out advertisement (advertisements) with her friends or and put up signs asking people to watch. Luckily,she did very good (well) . A lot of people pie were moved and gave their hands to Sichuan people. At the (╲) last,she raised 5. 000 yuan. She gave up (away) all the money away to the quake-hit areas.