Question

生活中人们常常需要做出决定，一些决定会对其产生重大影响，请叙述你曾经做出的一个对你产生重大影响的决定，并简要说明你的启示或感受，用英文写一篇100－120个词的短文。

注意：开头已给出，不计词数。

In life people make many important decisions．

Answer 1

In life people make many important decisions．Right decisions are so important that they affect us greatly.

My last decision was made when I entered Senior 3 in Miss Zhang’s English class. Since I was not good at English, Miss Zhang asked me to listen attentively in class and put down some important notes. But I was never a good listener. I went on my own way ignoring her suggestion completely until Miss Zhang had a talk with me. She made me realize the importance of note taking. Then I decided to follow her to take notes in her class. Since then , my English has improved greatly.

From this experience, I have realized a good decision benefits people . We should learn to take people’s advice and do the right things.

【解析】这是自由发挥的文章写作，主要围绕你曾经所做的有重大影响的决定谈谈你的启示和感受。本文最好写作记叙文，较为容易把握。本文为经典的三段论式写作。第一段点名主旨，第二段叙述事件，第三段谈启示，文章结构清晰严谨。第一段第二句Right decisions are so important that they affect us greatly使用了so…that…如此….以致…句型；第二段开头My last decision was made when I entered Senior 3 in Miss Zhang’s English class.使用了when领导的时间状语从句；第二段第二句Since I was not good at English, Miss Zhang asked me to listen attentively in class and put down some important notes使用了since领导的原因状语从句。本文短语使用十分好，使用了如：be good at善于，put down记下；go on ones’own way自行其路，since then 从那以后等十分常见经典的短语。本文在词语运用方面，十分擅长连词运用，如But I was never a good listener.使用了转折连词but，Then I decided to follow her to take notes in her class使用了连词then，然后，给文章增添许多亮点。总结：记叙文写作时多使用连词，短语等，会使文章更具故事性。

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