Question

【题目】外教Johnson开设了一个英语辅导班(English Tutorial)，按照学生实际需要进行辅导。参加者须根据个人实际情况提出申请并选择辅导内容。假定你是李华，请给外教写一封电子邮件，
要点如下：1）介绍个人情况；
2）说明辅导意向（如：口语、语法、写作、文化知识筹其中的一项或几项）；
3）表达愿望。
注意：1）词数100左右；
2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3）开头语和结尾语已为你写好。
Dear Mr.Johnson,
I am writing to you to apply for the membership of the English Tutorial.
Looking forward to you reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua.

Answer 1

【答案】One possible version：

Dear Mr.Johnson,

I am writing to you to apply for the membership of the English Tutorial.

As a Senior Grade 3 student,I think I'm doing well in English because I always get good marks in written English tests.But I still think I am not a perfect learner because I'm not so good at spoken English,and that is what troubles me most.And when I listen to native speakers,I find it hard to catch what they talk about.Whenever I speak English,I often make some mistakes,which annoys me.So,I want to be a member in the speaking tutorial so that I can improve my spoken English and communicate better with others.I'm sure I'll do much better in it with your help.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文。同学们在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：1.由于主题是根据个人实际情况提出申请并选择辅导内容。所以通篇的主要时态为一般现在时。2. 文章的要点也基本上都给出来了：a.介绍个人情况；b.说明辅导意向；c.表达愿望。3.要拓展内容，在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，如强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次。同时在列举措施的时候要使用合适的连接词如：First，second， Besides, What's more等，让文章看起来很有条理，也很流畅。本篇文章在写作时不要啰嗦，力求简洁。