Question

【题目】最近，你们班召开了以“我的中国梦”为主题的班会活动。请写一篇日记，记述班会情况及自己的感受。内容要点如下：

1.每位同学都畅谈了自己对中国梦的理解；

2.你谈到了自己的梦想；

3.如何实现自己的梦想。

注意事项：

1.短文词数不少于100;

2.不可逐条翻译;

3.开头已给出,不计入总词数。

December 20th Friday Fine

Recently we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream.

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

December 20th Friday Fine

Recently we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream. Inspired by President Xi’s Chinese Dream, everyone talked enthusiastically about his understanding of the Chinese Dream. We all believe that this dream will come true in the future.

I also talked about my own dream. I have always wanted to be a doctor. Not only can doctors save people’s lives but also they are doing a respectable job. Doctors can also help people to live a better life with their professional knowledge.

To realize my dream, I must try to work hard from now on. I must learn as much as I can so that I can get into a good medical college, where I can prepare myself adequately for the job of a doctor. Only in this way can I accomplish my goal.

【解析】

试题分析：分析要求可知，要点是写一篇日记记叙以“我的中国梦”为主题的班会活动，包括班级每位同学以及自己对梦想的理解。短文应该主要用一般过去时，主要用第一人称介绍活动内容。还应该尽量多使用较高级的词汇和短语以及固定句式，注意句子之间的连贯性。

【亮点说明】 文中用了一些高级的短语和句式。如：talked enthusiastically about; come true; To realize my dream .以及一个部分倒装句“Not only can doctors save people’s lives but also they are doing a respectable job. ”和一个完全倒装句“Only in this way can I accomplish my goal.”这些都很不错。