Question

【题目】在智能手机日益普及的当下，其五花八门的功能影响着我们的生活、社交、学习、工作、消费、休闲等各个方面。请你就某一个方面谈谈智能手机带给你的影响以及你对这种影响的看法。

要求：根据以上内容写一篇120词左右的短文。

提示：智能手机：smartphone

Answer 1

【答案】

Nowadays, the smartphone plays an important part in our daily life. In a way, it greatly changes the lifestyle.

With the help of smartphone, we can chat with friends, together with shopping and surf the Internet whenever we like. There is no doubt that the smartphone is a devoted friend and helper of my study. I will turn to it for help when I have no solutions to problems. As a result, I make some progress in my study.

As a matter of fact, the smartphone not only brings us benefits but also brings some problems. Some students are too crazy about it to concentrate on their studies.

In a word, we should deal with smartphones properly instead of depending on it too much.

【解析】

试题分析:本篇书面表达属于说明文，根据提示信息来介绍手机对我们生活的影响。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照手机给我们带来的好处或者坏处来进行介绍。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如There is no doubt that the smartphone is a devoted friend and helper of my study固定句型there is no doubt that……。the smartphone not only brings us benefits but also brings some problems.固定句型not only……but also……。Some students are too crazy about it to concentrate on their studies.固定句型too……to此外，文章还使用了大量短语plays an important part in our daily life 、chat with friends、turn to it for help等。插入语In a way，As a result, As a matter of fact使语言更加连贯。