题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,你所在的城市上饶正在参加大型城市文化旅游电视节目“魅力中国城”的评选活动。你计划在英文网站写封公开信,宣传你的家乡并号召更多的人为你的家乡投票。内容包括:
1.历史和文化;2.环境和特点;3.人民生活和城市状况。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:魅力中国城Charming Cities in China 大型的largescale
Dear Friends,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear friends,
I’m Li Hua. My hometown, the city of Shangrao, is competing in the largescale culture tourism TV programme “Charming Cities in China”. Therefore, I’m writing to get your support by voting for my hometown.
Located in the northeast of Jiangxi Province, my hometown is a beautiful city with a long history. Taoist culture is typical of the city. There are many tourist attractions worth visiting and many famous people once lived here. When walking around the city, you can feel the strong cultural atmosphere. Besides, its clean environment, blue sky and peaceful life here are sure to leave you a deep impression. People here are not only friendly but also warmhearted. As a popular tourist city, it is developing very fast, attracting millions of visitors every year.
Welcome to my hometown and I hope that you can vote for my hometown.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写一封公开信。
第一步:
审题:公开信 宣传你的家乡并号召更多的人为你的家乡投票
人称:第三人称
时态:一般现在时
结构:总分法,分三部分,第一部分介绍你的家乡所在地,并说明写信目的;第二部分介绍你的家乡;第三部分欢迎来你的家乡,希望为你的家乡投票。
要点:
1. 说明写信目的:你的家乡参加“魅力中国城”的评选活动,为你的家乡争取支持
2.介绍你的家乡
①历史和文化:历史悠久,道教文化是该城市的特色,旅游景点众多
②环境和特点:文化氛围浓厚,环境清洁、空气干净
③人民生活和城市状况:人们友好热情,城市发展迅速
3.欢迎来你的家乡,希望为你的家乡投票。
第二步:列提纲(重点词汇、短语)
compete in;vote for;be located in;a long history;be typical of;tourist attraction;be worth visiting;the strong cultural atmosphere;leave a deep impression;friendly;warmhearted;develop;attract
第三步:连词成句
(1) My hometown is the city of Shangrao.
(2) My hometown is competing in the largescale culture tourism TV programme “Charming Cities in China”.
(3) I’m writing to get your support by voting for my hometown.
(4) My hometown is located in the northeast of Jiangxi Province.
(5) My hometown is a beautiful city with a long history.
(6) Taoist culture is typical of the city.
(7) There are many tourist attractions.
(8) Many tourist attractions are worth visiting.
(9 ) Many famous people once lived here.
(10) When you walk around the city, you can feel the strong cultural atmosphere.
(11) Its clean environment, blue sky and peaceful life here will leave you a deep impression.
(12) People here are not only friendly but also warmhearted.
(13) It is developing very fast, attracting millions of visitors every year.
(14) I hope that you can vote for my hometown.
根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型,注意时态和主谓一致问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词、亮点词汇)
将第一个句子作同位语,连接下面两个句子
(1) My hometown is the city of Shangrao.
(2) My hometown is competing in the largescale culture tourism TV programme “Charming Cities in China”.
→ My hometown, the city of Shangrao, is competing in the largescale culture tourism TV programme “Charming Cities in China”.
将第一个句子用过去分词作状语,连接下面两个句子
(4) My hometown is located in the northeast of Jiangxi Province.
(5) My hometown is a beautiful city with a long history.
→Located in the northeast of Jiangxi Province, my hometown is a beautiful city with a long history.
将下面两个句子连接成一句子
(7)There are many tourist attractions.
(8) Many tourist attractions are worth visiting.
→There are many tourist attractions which are worth visiting.
→There are many tourist attractions worth visiting.
用状语从句的省略形式表达下面的句子
(10) When you walk around the city, you can feel the strong cultural atmosphere.
→ When walking around the city, you can feel the strong cultural atmosphere.
适当地运用高级词汇、复杂句式提升文章的档次,增加文章的可读性。