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17.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(︿),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
 2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
An English club will be set up on Dec.16in our school.It aims to arouse our interests in English and broaden our horizons.
The club provides a platform,when we English lovers can improve our English proficiency through various activities.Firstly,we were to discuss some hot topics and express our opinions free.Secondly,English speech competitions and English debates going to be held to promoting our speaking ability.Therefore,there will be some lectures about western cultures.
I am sure English lovers will benefit a lot from a club.Those who are interested are welcome to join in us.Please sign up for one in Room 306of the library building.

分析 改错题要注意代词,连词以及词性、人称的转化.
做好短文改错题,可以从以下三方面去考虑:1.快速阅读短文,如抓住中心思想,从整体上对短文有个了解. 2.充分运用语言的基础知识,从句型结构、词的变化、词类选择、词的搭配、习惯用法出发,进行分析判断,尽快找出错误在何处. 3.重视整体和语境,从上下文关系中找出表达连接关系或逻辑关系的词或词组,判断是递进关系还是转折关系,是因果关系还是让步关系.

解答 An English club will be set up on Dec.16 in our school.It aims to arouse our interests in English and broaden 
                                                                                                          interest
our horizons.
The club provides a platform,when we English lovers can improve our English proficiency through various 
                                          where
activities.Firstly,we were to discuss some hot topics and express our opinions free.Secondly,English 
                                 are                                                                        freely
speech competitions and English debates∧going to be held to promoting our speaking ability.Therefore
                                                      are                            promote              Moreover/Besides/Futhermore
there will be some lectures about western cultures.
I am sure English lovers will benefit a lot from a club.Those who are interested are welcome to join in us.
                                                               the                                                                     in去掉
Please sign up for one in Room 306of the library building.
                           it
1.interets-interest  考查名词单复数  interest作"兴趣、关注"讲时为不可数名词,作"业余爱好"讲时为可数名词.本处表达意思为"激发我们对英语的兴趣",故应用不可数名词interest;
2.when-where  考查定语从句  先行词为"platform"意为"平台"指地点,故引起定语从句应用关系副词where;
3.were-are  考查时态  由第一段第一句"An English club will be set up on Dec.16 in our school"可知该English club还未成立,所以"我们讨论热点话题"也未发生,故此处应该使用一般将来时;
4.free-freely  考查副词"express our opinions   "意为"自由发表观点","自由"修饰动作"发表",修饰动词应使用副词,故应该用freely;
5.debates 和going 之间加are  考查谓语  该句谓语部分使用了表示一般将来时的结构"be going to do"缺少了be,又由于主语为"English speech competitions and English debates"表示复数,故be动词应该用are;
6.promoting-promote  考查非谓语动词  此处表达意思为"来提高我们的口语技能",是举办英语演讲比赛和辩论赛的目的,所以应该用不定时表目的,将promoting改为promote;
7.Therefore-Moreover/Besides/Futhermore  考查逻辑关系"将举办英语演讲赛和辩论赛来提升我们的口语技能"与后一句"还将有关于西方文化的讲座"为递进关系,therefore意为"因此"表达因果关系,moreover/besides/futhermore意为"此外、另外"表示递进关系;
8.a-the  考查冠词  此处"club"即为前文"English club",对于前文已出现事物,应使用定冠词the修饰限定表特指;
9.去掉in  考查固定搭配 join为"加入某团体、组织成为其中一员"而join in为"参加某活动"此处应为"加入我们成为我们中一员"故应用join;
10.one-it 考查代词  one"代指前文所指事物一类中的任一个"而it"代指前文所指事物本身",此处"在图书馆306室报名参加"的应该是本文所介绍的"English club",故应该用it来指代.

点评 考生在做题时需理清文章的事理,注意词性、语态、时态的转换,分析句子结构.

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