题目内容
11.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
While taking a walk with my pet dog this morning,I found the middle-aged man nearby was shouting on his phone.Obvious,he had a bad day.Before he left,I noticed his keys were on the ground.So I immediately picked up and ran away to find the man.Several minutes later,I found him,whom was still shouting on his phone beside his car.I walked to him and asked if he could hold on a little seconds.At first,he was angry about my interrupt.Then I showed to his keys and explained the whole thing.On heard my words,he immediately hang up his phone and apologized for his rudeness.
分析 一天早晨我带着狗去散步,发现一个中年人在电话里大喊大叫.他离开后,我发现地上有一串钥匙,我马上捡起来去找那个人.几分钟后,我找到了他,他还在车里大声打电话,我走过去问他能否停一下.一开始他很生气,当我把钥匙给他看时,他挂断电话并道了歉.
解答 While taking a walk with my pet dog this morning,I found the middle-aged man nearby was shouting on his phone.Obvious,he had a bad day.Before he left,I noticed his keys were on the ground.So I immediately picked∧up and ran away to find the man.Several minutes later,I found him,whom was still shouting on his phone beside his car.I walked to him and asked if he could hold on a little seconds.At first,he was angry about my interrupt.Then I showed to his keys and explained the whole thing.On heard my words,he immediately hang up his phone and apologized for his rudeness.
详解:
1.the改为a;冠词错误.句意表达的是泛指因为中年人,要用不定冠词.
2.Obvious改为Obviously;句中obvious修饰整个句子,且有逗号分隔,要用副词.
3.Before改为After;连词错误.句意表达的是他离开之后,不是之前.
4.加them;代词错误.句意表达的是捡起钥匙;句中指代的是keys,要用them来指代.
5.whom改为who;连词错误.句中was still shouting on his phone beside his car修饰him,是一个非限制性定语从句;从句缺少主语,且指代的是人,要用who来引导.
6.little改为few;量词错误.句中修饰的是复数名词seconds,要用a few来修饰,a little修饰不可数名词.
7.interrupt改为interruption;名词错误.句中有形容词性物主代词my修饰,要用名词形式.
8.to去掉;动词搭配错误.show是及物动词,直接带宾语,不要添加介词.
9.heard改为hearing;分词错误.句中hear作介词on的宾语,要用动名词形式.
10.hang改为hung;时态错误.文章讲述的是过去发生的事实,要用一般过去时态;hang的过去式是不规则变化.
点评 短文改错题考查的是语境理解能力和用法基础知识.常考的知识点有:名词(单复数错误),动词(时态,语态,搭配,转换),代词(指代错误),形容词和副词(转换,比较等级),连词(and,but,or)等.偶尔也会考查逻辑错误,如本来用her,却用了his等等.解题是要注意:以句子为单位,以动词为中心.看句子要看完整,避免句子前后矛盾的错误;找错误要以动词为主,动词或与动词有关的错误占了改错的题的重要一部分.

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