Question

【题目】假设你是红星中学高一（1）班的学生李华，下面四幅图描述了你周末生活方式变化的经过。请根据图片的先后顺序，为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文。词数不少于60。

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Answer 1

【答案】I used to play computer games almost every weekend. Computer games were so appealing to me that I was totally addicted to it. After some time, my eyesight became weak. Meanwhile, I gained a lot of weight. With the situation getting worse, I had to go to see a doctor. The doctor gave me a physical examination and I had my eyes examined as well. The doctor advised me to do some exercise in the open air as much as possible. To improve my health, I accepted his advice and began to ride bicycle every weekend. And now I’m feeling much better.

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于看图作文。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为看图作文；假设你是红星中学高一（1）班的学生李华，下面四幅图描述了你周末生活方式变化的经过。请根据图片的先后顺序，为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文。词数不少于60。人称使用第一人称。时态应为一般过去时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：used to；appeal to；be addicted to；have my eyes examined；as much as possible等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。