Question

最近，某中学英语报向学生征文，主题New Look of My Hometown。请你根据以下内容提示，用英语为该报写一篇短文，介绍家乡的情况并发表自己的看法。

概 况	1．气候夏热多雨，冬冷多雪，冬夏温差很大 2．近年经济发展迅速，城市面貌一新，高楼林立，道路宽敞，环境优美； 3．人民生活条件不断改善，不少人搬进新居，拥有私家车。
你的看法	家乡人民将更加努力工作……

注意：1．可适当增加细节，使短文连贯、通顺；

2．短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；

3．词数100左右。

参考词汇：economy经济 

New Look of My Hometown

My hometown lies in the east of  Liaoning ，with a river flowing through．_____________

 

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

New Look of My Hometown

My hometown lies in the east of Liaoning, with a river flowing through．It is a beautiful city．The climate here is warm with plenty of rain in summer and cold with plenty of snow in winter．There is a sharp difference in temperature between summer and winter. 

In recent years，the economy of the city has been developing rapidly．The city is taking on a new look with high buildings，wide roads and better surroundings．People’s living conditions are improving day by day．Many people have moved into new apartments and some even have cars of their own．

I’m sure people in my hometown will work still harder to make my hometown more beautiful and our life happier．

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

考点：提纲类作文

点评：本文属于提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。