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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\ )划掉。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分
Life is not easy for any of us. We will unavoidably suffered bitterness and sadness from failure. Thus, there is very important for us to have a good mood in our daily life. If you have a good mood, you will be happy with everything in the world. Most important, you will have an optimistic effect at the people around you. We all will live harmonious and happy life. It is good for our health as well.
However, sometimes when you meet some difficulties, when you quarrel with others, but when you fail in doing nothing, you may have a bad mood. If so, you should get rid of it as soon as possibly. As we all know, every coin has two sides. So you should think more about its bright side. We are sure that everything will be better with time passed by.
Remember: only you can make himself happy.

Answer 1

【答案】①suffered→suffer

②there→it

③important→importantly

④at→on

⑤在live之后加a

⑥but→or

⑦nothing→something

⑧possibly→possible

⑨passed→passing

⑩himself→yourself

【解析】生活对我们任何一个人来说都不容易。记住：只有自己才能使自己开心。

①助动词will后面用动词原形，故把suffered改为suffer。

②此处不是there be句型，而是it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正的主语，故把there改为it。

③副词修饰整个句子，故把important改为importantly。

④固定词组：have an effect on sth.对……产生影响，故把at改为on。

⑤固定形式：live a...life，表示“过着……的生活”。故在live之后加a。

⑥句意：当你和别人争吵或做某事失败时，你会有一个坏的情绪。故把but 改为 or。

⑦ 句意：失败做某事。故把nothing 改为 something。

⑧as ...as possible尽可能……。故把possibly改为 possible。

⑨with的独立主格结构，time与pass是主动关系，故把passed 改为passing。

⑩句意：只有你才能使你自己开心。故把himself改为 yourself。