Question

假如你是李华，你和你的美国笔友David约好这个寒假你将去美国看望他，并给他带一些具有中国特色的物产，比如剪纸，京剧脸谱等。但是，你的表哥将在这个春节结婚，并且你还将代表学校去北京参加一个很重要的英语演讲比赛。因此，你将无法去美国。请写一封信给David说明情况，致歉，并提出弥补措施。开头和结尾已经给出。

词数：100~120词。

参考词汇：剪纸：paper-cutting??? 京剧脸谱：Beijing Opera Facial Mask

Dear David,

???? I’m writing the letter to apologize _____________________________________________

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???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? Yours sincerely

???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear David,

???? I’m writing the letter to apologize that I can’t go to America to see you this winter holiday. I promised to visit you and bring you some traditional things of China such as paper-cutting and Beijing Opera Facial Masks. But I’m afraid I can’t keep my word. One reason is that my cousin’s wedding is planned for this Spring Festival. Of course, I can’t miss it. Another reason is that there will be an important English speech contest. I will participate in it on behalf of my school. I have to prepare for it.

To express my sincere apology, I will send the paper-cutting and Beijing Opera Facial Masks to you by airmail. And if you are free, nothing will be better if you can come to China to attend a traditional wedding. I’m sure you won’t be disappointed.

I do hope you can forgive me.

Yours sincerely

???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文是书信类作文，你的美国朋友David邀请你去美国，但是你因故不能去，要求写一封信给David说明情况，致歉，并提出弥补措施。文章的要点也基本上都给出来了，而且很具体，考生要把要点解释清楚，不能有遗漏。在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，如强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次。同时在列举措施的时候要使用合适的连接词如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，让文章看起来很有条理，也很流畅。本篇文章在写作时不要啰嗦，力求简洁。

【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，应用了一些较好的词组和句子： I promised to答应做…keep one’s word信守诺言. participate in 参加，prepare for为…做准备，on behalf of代表， One reason is that my cousin’s wedding is planned for this Spring Festival. Another reason is that there will be an important English speech contest. 这两句话用了表语从句， To express my sincere apology, I will send the paper-cutting and Beijing Opera Facial Masks to you by airmail. 这句话用了不定式做目的状语， I do hope you can forgive me.这句话用了强调。

考点：考查书信类书面表达