[题目]假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及二个单词的增加.删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及二个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I have a muscle disease, so I can’t run or climb stairs as quick as other people. One problem is I don’t look any different with other people. So some children in my primary school laughed when I got out of the breath after running a short way. Now my life is a lot easier at high school because my fellow students had accepted me. I am very busy with no time to feel sorry for me. My dream is to work for a firm that develop computer software. Have a disability does not mean your life is not satisfied. So don’t feel sorry for the disabled and make fun of them.

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【解析】1. quick改为quickly

考查副词作状语。句意：我有与肌肉有关的病，所以我不能像其他人一样跑或爬楼梯。分析句子可知，本句中的quick是修饰动词run和climb的，修饰动词要用副词，而quick是形容词，故要改为副词quickly。

2.在is后添加that

考查表语从句。分析句子可知系动词is后有一个表语从句，缺少关联词。分析句子可知，从句中不缺少成份，句意完整，故填一个连接词that。因此在is后添加that。

3.with改为from

考查固定搭配。句意：问题是我看起来和别人不一样。be different from…，为固定搭配，意为“与….不同”，故把with改为from.

4.删除the

考查固定搭配。句意：我跑完一小段短路后就喘不上气来，所以学校里一些孩子就会嘲笑我。out of breath，为固定搭配，意为“喘不过气来,上气不接下气”，the是多余的。故要删除the。

5.had 改为have

考查谓语动词的时态。句意：现在我的生活比高中时容易多了，因为我的同学们已经接受了我。分析句子Now my life is a lot easier at high school because my fellow students had accepted me.可知，句中的had accepted的时态是不对的。本句是说现在已经接受了我，可知要用现在完成时，故把had改为have。

6.me改为myself

考查人称代词。句意：我很忙，没有时间为我自己感到难过。分析句子可知，本句表达的是没时间为自己难过，故用反身代词myself。

7.develop改为develops

考查谓语动词的时态。句意：我的梦想是在一家开发计算机软件的公司工作。分析句子可知，指的是开发软件的公司，讲的是事实，要用一般现在时，故把develop改为develops。

8..Have改为Having

考查非谓语做主语。句意：残疾并不意味着你的生活不令人满意。分析句子可知，本句中的Have a disability在句子中做主语，而动词原形是不能做主语的，故用其动词的ing形式。因此Have改为Having。

9.satisfied改为satisfying

考查形容词辨析。分析本句可知，satisfied在句子中修饰your life，satisfied一般修饰人，修饰物的一般用动词的ing形式satisfying，故把satisfied改为satisfying。

10.and 改为or

考查连词。句意：因此，别怜悯残疾人或是取笑他们。分析句子可知，本句中表示“或者”，而and是“和”，只有or表示“或者”。故and改为or。

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