Question

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出改正后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 

I can’t swim so I have a strong fear of water. Look back at my childhood, I think that three reasons might explain fear. Firstly, I am not allowed to go near the water when I was a child, as my mother had an unreasonable fear of it. Therefore, I was taught to see to the water as something danger. Secondly, my eyes became bad when I was five. If I took off my glass in the water, I couldn’t see something, and this increased my fear. What’s worse, for a child I once saw a neighbor drowned. Since then I have been more frightening.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

 so—because

 look—looking

 加the

 am—was

 去掉to

 danger--dangerous

 glass--glasses

 something---anything

 for--as

 frightening—frightened

【解析】

试题分析：文章讲述了我很怕水，并说明了三个原因，因为妈妈怕水，所以妈妈教导我说水是危险的东西，二是我的眼睛在五岁的时候出了毛病，摘下眼睛在水下什么也看不到，三是我的邻居被淹死了，也增加了我对水的恐惧。

 so—because 连词的用法。我不会游泳，因为我对水有恐惧感，故应改为because.

 look—looking现在分词的用法。回顾我的童年，有三个方面的原因可以解释，这里是现在分词做状语，故应改为现在分词。

 加the冠词的用法。有三个原因可以解释我对水的恐惧，所以这里的恐惧应是特指加the.

 am—was 时态的用法。我小的时候，不被允许去水的附近，讲的是小时候的事情，故应改为was.

 去掉to 动词用法的考查。句意为：把水看作危险的东西，see sth as ,sth的前面不需要to,故应去掉。

 danger--dangerous考查词性的用法。something dangerous 危险的东西，故应改为dangerous.

 glass—glasses名词单复数的考查。这里作眼睛讲，就用复数形式。

 something---anything考查代词的用法。something 用于肯定句中而anything用于否定句中，所以应改为anything.

 for—as介词的用法。作为一个小孩儿，我第一次看见了我的邻居被淹死了，故应改为as.

 frightening—frightened分词用法的考查。frightening 用来修饰物，而frightened用来修饰人。故应改为frightened.

考点:考查短文纠错