题目内容
【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(/\),并在该句下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The winter holiday is coming, which made me excited. I have been looking forward at relaxing myself. I’d like to go skating, climb mountains and see several movie. I think I can play the basketball with my classmates. How a wonderful time I’ll have during the winter holiday! However, my parents think different. They don’t want me go out. They are afraid I’ll be knocked down by a truck, fallen off a tree, or fight with others. Beside, they are afraid I will lose my way. I hate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage. To get more freedom, I will try to persuade them.
【答案】
【1】made改为makes;
【2】at改为to;
【3】movie改为movies
【4】去掉the;
【5】How改为What;
【6】different 改为differently
【7】加to;
【8】fallen改为fall;
【9】Beside改为Besides;
【10】keeping改为kept;
【解析】
试题分析:短文改错题。
【1】made改为makes;文中第一句The winter holiday is coming, which made me excited.前面用的是一般现在时,后面要时态一致。主语是the winter holiday单数,后面make要变成单三形式,故made改为makes。
【2】at改为to;考查固定搭配。文中第二句I have been looking forward at...look forward to期待,盼望,故at改为to。
【3】movie改为movies;文中第三句climb mountains and see several movie.前面mountains用的是复数,and连接两个并列的短语,所以movie也要用复数,故movie改为movies。
【4】去掉the;考查固定用法。文中第四句I think I can play the basketball with my classmates. 打篮球是play basketball,中间不需要冠词the,故去掉the。
【5】How改为What;考查感叹句。文中第五句 How a wonderful time ...由how和what引导的感叹句主要有两种形式:①what+(a/an)+adj.+n.+主语+谓语+(it is).;②How+adj.(adv.)+主语+谓语+(it is).根据原文可知,what更符合题意,故How改为What。
【6】different 改为differently;文中第六句my parents think different. Think是动词,动词后面是用副词来修饰,故different 改为differently。
【7】加to;考查want的用法。文中第七句They don’t want me go out. want的用法:want to do sth;想要做某事;want sb to do sth 想要某人做某事;故加to。
【8】fallen改为fall;文中第八句 I’ll be knocked down by a truck, fallen off a tree, or fight with others.主语是 I’ll,连词or连接两个并列短语,后面的是动词原形,故fallen改为fall。
【9】Beside改为Besides;文中第九句Beside, they are afraid..句子开头且用逗号隔开,所以前面是一个连词,另外,除…之外(还有)是besides,故Beside改为Besides。
【10】keeping改为kept;文中第十句I hate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage. 句意:我讨厌像笼子里的鸟一样对待。后面的是一个后置定语,主语是the bird,物作主语,后面要用过去分词,故keeping改为kept。