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17．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词作斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；=2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Dear Mandy，
I'm not doing well in my lessons at school，especial in maths．My dad says I must try hard because he wants me go to university．He thinks I'm lazy，but it's not true．I work really hard，often study late into the night！I've tried to talk to my mother，but she always said I have to work as hard like my brother does．My brother doesn't study very hard，and he always gets excellent grades．It's not fair!
The only thing I like it is art．My teacher says I'm the best student she's had for year．When I told my dad，all he said was，"You mustn't waste your time in art．You must focus your mind on your lessons！"
I'm feeling quite puzzling as to what to do now．Would you please help me out？Thanks a lot!
Yours sincerely，
Lisa．

分析 本文主要讲述作者在数学方面不是学得很好．父亲认为作者懒惰，希望作者努力学习，母亲则希望作者像弟弟一样努力．其实，作者已经很努力了，但作者感兴趣的事是艺术．作者不知该怎么办，因此写信向Mandy求助．

解答 Dear Mandy，
I'm not doing well in my lessons at school，especial in maths．My dad says I must try hard because he wants me∧go to university．He thinks I'm lazy，but it's not true．I work really hard，often study late into the night！I've tried to talk to my mother，but she always said I have to work as hard like my brother does．My brother doesn't study very hard，and he always gets excellent grades．It's not fair!
The only thing I like it is art．My teacher says I'm the best student she's had for year．When I told my dad，all he said was，"You mustn't waste your time in art．You must focus your mind on your lessons！"
I'm feeling quite puzzling as to what to do now．Would you please help me out？Thanks a lot!
Yours sincerely，
Lisa．
详解：
1．espefial改为especially 考查副词． 由副词修饰介词短语in maths．
2．加to 考查动词不式．want后接动词时用动词不定式作宾语补足语．
3．sduty改为studying 考查现在分词．I与study之间是主谓关系，用现在分词作状语．
4．said改为says 考查动词时态．根据前后语境应用一般现在时．
5．like改为as 考查固定搭配．as…as意为"和…一样"，表示同级的比较．使用时要注意第一个as为副词，第二个as为连词．其基本结构为：as+adj．/adv．+as．
6．and改为but 考查连词．前后两个分句是转折关系，用连词but． 
7．去掉it 考查定语从句．分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句，先行词thing在从句中作宾语，引导词that作like的宾语已经省略，不能再出现it作宾语，要去掉it． 
8．year改为years 考查名词复数．for years意为"好多年"，是固定搭配．
9．in改为on 考查介词． waste time on sth．意为"在某事上浪费时间"，是固定搭配．
10．puzzling改为puzzled 考查过去分词．过去分词作表语，多半用来表示人物所处的心理状态或情感变化，其主语多半是人．

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．

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删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
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