题目内容
11．现在，社会上存在一种现象，越来越多的中国人喜欢过"洋节"．昨天我们班进行了一次讨论---是否我们应该过洋节？| 赞成的理由 （35%的学生） | 1．随着科技的发展，世界已经成了一个地球村； 2．有助于了解其他国家的风俗习惯，丰富我们的传统文化； … |
| 反对的理由 （60%的学生） | 1．浪费钱； 2．自己国家的传统和习俗要传承下去； … |
| 你的看法 | … |
2．可以适当增加内容，以使行文连贯；
3．开头已为你写好，不计入总词数．
Nowadays，there appears a phenomenon that many Chinese become crazy about foreign festivals．Yesterday，we had a discussion on whether we should celebrate foreign festivals or not．
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分析 本文属正反方观点的议论文作文，主题是对"中国人该不该过洋节"的不同观点，题目给出了大部分要点，也要考生给出自己的观点．文章结构清晰，先是一些同学反对的观点，然后是赞同的观点，最后是自己的观点，要求考生用地道的英语表达自己的观点，要求观点明确，驾驭语言的能力强，选择词汇的时候要选择相对高级的词汇，也要运用多种句型，让文章更有变化．难度在于选择合适的词汇和句型表达文章需要的意思，可以变换使用一些容易驾驭的句子或者词汇实现同样的目的．在写作的时候要运用合适的连接词把要点串联起来，使文章成为一个整体．
【亮点说明】文章结构清晰，观点明确，有不少好句子和短语：focus too much on"太关注"，be familiar to"为…熟悉"，As far as I'm concerned"据我所知"，60% of the students think that it is wrong to do so because people will waste a lot of money observing these festivals．这句话用了it做形式主语，people are likely to forget their own tradition and culture if they focus too much on foreign festivals．这句话用了固定句型，As we all know，with the development of science and technology，the earth has，in fact，become a global village．这句话用了非限制性定语从句．还有范文使用了Besides，这样的词，使文章更加连贯．
60% of the students think that it is wrong to do so because people will waste a lot of money observing these festivals．（高分句型一）
As we all know，with the development of science and technology，the earth has，in fact，become a global village．（高分句型二）
As far as I'm concerned，if we can strike a balance between our own festivals and foreign ones，it's not a bad idea to have more festivals to celebrate．（高分句型三）
解答 Nowadays，there appears a phenomenon that many Chinese become crazy about foreign festivals．Yesterday，we had a discussion on whether we should celebrate foreign festivals or not．Opinions are divided on this issue．
60% of the students think that it is wrong to do so because people will waste a lot of money observing these festivals．（高分句型一） Besides，people are likely to forget their own tradition and culture if they focus too much on foreign festivals．
However，35% of the students argue that it's a natural trend to celebrate foreign festivals．As we all know，with the development of science and technology，the earth has，in fact，become a global village．（高分句型二）Those festivals that were once foreign to us are now familiar to us．
As far as I'm concerned，if we can strike a balance between our own festivals and foreign ones，it's not a bad idea to have more festivals to celebrate．（高分句型三）
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．
