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15．假设你是李华，上周你参加了英语作文竞赛，并获得了一等奖．请你用英语给作文指导老师Jack写一封感谢信，主要内容包括：
1．告知获奖；
2．介绍比赛情况；
3．表达获奖感受．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Jack，
How are you？I am writing to let you know that I won the first prize in the English composition contest last week．（高分句型一）Before the contest，I was very nervous．But when I began writing，I thought of all your efforts that you had made to help me during the past few months and gradually I calmed myself down．Although the question and answer section was the most challenging，I got through it quite smoothly thanks to all your suggestions．（高分句型二）When the judge announced the result I was very excited but it was really a pity that you were not there．Upon knowing the result，I couldn't wait to express my appreciation of your help．（高分句型三）
Please accept my warmest thanks．Best wishes．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假设你是李华，上周你参加了英语作文竞赛，并获得了一等奖．请你用英语给作文指导老师Jack写一封感谢信，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：告知获奖；介绍比赛情况；表达获奖感受．  2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：the first prize一等奖；think of想起；make efforts to do 不遗余力地去做；gradually逐渐地；thanks to幸亏，由于；
I am writing to let you know that I won the first prize in the English composition contest last week．（高分句型一）
Although the question and answer section was the most challenging，I got through it quite smoothly thanks to all your suggestions．（高分句型二）
Upon knowing the result，I couldn't wait to express my appreciation of your help．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Jack，
       How are you？I am writing to let you know that I won the first prize in the English composition contest last week．（高分句型一）Before the contest，I was very nervous．But when I began writing，I thought of all your efforts that you had made to help me during the past few months and gradually I calmed myself down．Although the question and answer section was the most challenging，I got through it quite smoothly thanks to all your suggestions．（高分句型二）When the judge announced the result I was very excited but it was really a pity that you were not there．Upon knowing the result，I couldn't wait to express my appreciation of your help．（高分句型三）
       Please accept my warmest thanks．Best wishes．
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                      Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．