Question

假定你在参加一场英语辩论赛。你是正方辩手，试用英语简要地表明自己的观点。

主题	Shall a senior student take a part—time job in holidays?
观点	1．高中生重视功课，而对社会知道甚少。
	2．假期做a part—time job 是很好的社会实践。
	3．通过书本学到的东西不如通过实践学到的东西有效。
	4．通过社会实践，我们可以在知识和能力两个方面取得进步。
	5．假期做a part-time job 的报酬或多或少有些帮助。
结论	高中生……

Answer 1

 Dear friends,

       Here are my points .We students of today have to pay much attention to our lessons and know little of society though it’s not our fault .A holiday is the best time to make up for that. Taking a part—time job is a good form of social practice. What is learned in books can’t have the same deep effect on us as what is learned through experience. In social practice, we can surely make progress in both knowledge and ability. Besides, taking a part-time job, we may get paid more or less to help our family. Thus ,I will say a senior school student should take a part-time job in holidays, if possible ,of course.

解析:

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