题目内容
假如你是一名中学生李华,你校上周末举行了一次英语演讲比赛,请根据下表内容,用英语写一封信给远在美国的笔友john,介绍这次活动的情况。
时间 | 地点 | 演讲者 | 评委 | 观众 |
上周六上午 | 学校操场 | 每班2名选手,共20人 | 5位英语教师 | 全校同学 |
主题 | 主要内容 | 比赛结果 | ||
让我们的校园更美丽 | 1、保护校园清洁,不乱丢杂物; 2、爱护花草树木,让校园充满绿色; 3、举止文明礼貌,关爱他人 | 6名同学获奖,你班推荐的2名同学都获奖 | ||
要求:1、信应包含提示的主要内容,可适当增加细节;
2、词数:120词左右;
3、信的开头和结尾已写好,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:校园 campus 乱丢v litter 垃圾n 绿色greenness
Dear John,
We held a speech contest on the playground last Saturday morning.
Do you have such activities in your school?
Best wishes to you.
Dear John,
We held a speech contest on the playground last Saturday morning. Twenty students selected from ten classes, two for each class, took part in it. Five teachers of English worked as judges while all the students in the school viewed the contest. The topic of the speech is “to make our campus more beautiful.” In their speeches, the students insisted that we should keep our campus clean by avoiding littering, take good care of the plants so that we can enjoy the greenness, behave well and care for others so that everyone feels loved on campus. Finally, six students gained prizes, including the two from my class. I think all of us have learned a lot from the speeches. We all mean what we say. So our campus will surely become more beautiful.
Do you have such activities in your school?
Best wishes to you.
【解析】
试题分析:本文是篇材料作文,材料非常简单,学生很容易把握写作要求和写作目的。考生在写作之前必修认真审题,首先要注意文章的时态,要求是保持校园整洁,所以要用一般现在时。但本文必须用第一人称。再有就是应该注意句子的衔接,以提高作文的档次。
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语为文章增色不少,比如care for,insist,avoid等等。还运用了三个宾语从句,selected from过去分词短语作定语等。并注意了句子的衔接如:while,so that,finally等等。
考点:表格作文