Question

【题目】现在，越来越多的人喜欢养狗, 但是一些问题也随之而来。某英文报以此为主题举办征文活动。请根据下表内容用英语写一篇短文向该报投稿，倡导大家文明养狗，并谈谈自己的看法。

现象	后果	个人看法
狗会到处乱跑； 随处大小便。	有些狗可能会袭击人； 动物粪便污染环境。	……

注意: 1 . 词数：100左右；

2 . 不要逐条翻译，可以适当发挥。

Answer 1

【答案】

Nowadays, more and more people like to raise dogs. Dogs are often a much-loved part of many families. However, some owners allow their dogs to run around out of control, which can cause problems for others. Besides, dogs’ wastes are a serious problem because they spread disease and pollute the environment. Even worse, some dogs become aggressive and bite people, sometimes causing serious injury and even causing rabies.

To keep us safe and healthy, we should change the uncivilized way in which some people keep dogs. In my opinion, the government should take measures to bring it under control. Also, remember that if you are unfortunate enough to be bitten by a dog, you should deal with it in the proper way and go to see a doctor immediately.

【解析】

写表达观点的英语作文时。首先在写正文的时候一定不要遗漏文中给出的要点。先将文中的观点表达清楚，最后要阐明自己的观点，语句要通顺流畅。尽可能地避免出现语法错误，做到文中语意清楚，简单明了。此类文在写作时主要是运用一般现在时和一般将来时，或是用一些情态动词。人称要根据内容来定，可使用第一人称也可使用其他人称。在书写时一定要尽可能地多使用高级词汇、常用的短语和句型，例如本文中用了However, besides, even worse, 和under control这样的短语以提高文章的可欣赏性；恰当使用一些连词和插入语，可以让文章表达自然、流畅。