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书面表达（满分30分）
假设你叫杨名，今年报名参加了某大学自主招生。这所大学要求考生用英语写一封申请信，请按下面提示写一封英语申请信。内容应包括：
个人情况：性别、年龄、现就读学校（保定先锋中学）
个人条件：各门功课都不错，尤其擅长英语（曾获得全国中学生英语口语大赛一等奖）。
申请此大学原因：名气大，校园环境优美
注意：1. 词数100左右，开头语已为你写好。
2. 可适当增加细节，以行文连贯。
3. 生词；申请—apply(v. ),application(n. )
Dear Dean,
My name is Yang Ming. I’ve learned that your university will admit students in advance…
Yours Truly,
Yang Ming.

Answer 1

One possible version：
Dear Dean,
My name is Yang Ming. I’ve learned that your university will admit students in advance。With a great longing to enter your school ，I’d like to make this application。
I’m a boy of 18 at baoding xianfeng high school 。I do well in every subject especially in English 。I ever won the first prize in the National English spoken contest for the high school students。Deeply interested in your school ，which enjoys a high reputation and beautiful campus ，I’m writing to you in the hope that I may obtain an opportunity to further my study in your university 。if you could give me a chance I will be very grateful。
Looking forward to your early reply。
Yours Truly,
Yang Ming.

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