Question

4．以下是三座城市在就业、娱乐、环境方面的满意度．假如你的家庭打算移居到其中的某座城市，请从你和家庭的情况考虑选择一座比较满意的城市，并简要谈谈选择这座城市的理由．
提示：不必对图表中的数据做详细描写． 

Answer 1

分析 本文是图表作文，根据文章图表和所给提示信息写一篇短文，阐述你的家庭打算移居到其中的某座城市，考虑在就业、娱乐、环境等方面选择一座比较满意的城市并说明理由．
写作要点：1．概述图表；2．选择城市B的理由；3．结尾点题．
写作时时态以一般现在时为主．人称以第一和第三人称为主．
重要短语：illustrate sth （解释某事），as follows（如下），according to（根据），in one's opinion（某人认为），plays a vital role in（起重要作用），affect sth （影响某物），as well （也），do some recreational activities （进行一些娱乐活动），such as （例如），in terms of（就…而言），meet our needs（同时），all in all（问题的答案），take sth into account（许诺某人某事），embrace the life（许诺某人某事）．
【高分句型一】
1．①what's important to my family is②that we can live in a city with a pleasant environment ③which not only plays a vital role in our physical fitness，but greatly affects our mental health as well．
①此处是由连接代词"what"引导的主语从句，"what"在主语从句中作主语．
②此处是由连接词"that"引导的表语从句，"that"在从句中起连接词的作用，无意义．
③此处是由关系代词"which"引导的定语从句，"which"在定语从句中作主语，先行词为"environmen"，定语从句中由"not only…，but also…"结构连接两个谓语动词．
【高分句型二】
2．What's more，we can see that the employment in City B is not so bad from the chat，which is better than City C．
此处是由关系代词"which"引导的非限制性定语从句，关系代词"which"在从句中作主语，指代前面整个主句的内容．

解答 This bar chart illustrates the satisfaction of employment、entertainment and environment in three cities．Among all the cities involved，according to the situation of my family，plan to move to City B．I have some reasons as follows．（概述图表）
Firstly，City B has the second best environment of all the three cities．In my opinion，what's important to my family is that we can live in a city with a pleasant environment which not only plays a vital role in our physical fitness，but greatly affects our mental health as well．【高分句型一】（选择城市B的理由一）
Secondly，there are three young members including me in my family，and we always do some recreational activities together，such as going shopping and doing some sports．In terms of entertainment，City B can meet our needs more than the other cities．（选择城市B的理由二）
What's more，we can see that the employment in City B is not so bad from the chat，which is better than City C．【高分句型二】My parents are both senior engineers and I have no worries about them．For me，I'm just a high school student，employment is not my priority．I know if I study hard form now on，I can find a good job without any doubt in the near future．（选择城市B的理由三）
All in all，after taking what my family need into account．City B is my first choice．I look forward to embracing the life of the new city．（结尾点题）

点评 表格类作文写作要注意：1）不同文体的格式，避免"填表式"表达.2）灵活变通，避免"硬译式"，表达表格中的汉语提示简洁凝练，概括性强，表达时切忌逐字逐句翻译，要做灵活调整或进行补充；较为抽象、复杂的汉语提示应善于变通转换．3）衔接，避免"单句式"表达，使全文语篇通顺连贯．