题目内容
【题目】书面表达
某中学生英文论坛上,对残疾人乘坐公共交通工具的问题进行了讨论。有位网名叫Life-lover的网友的帖子引起了大家的关注。请你根据帖子的内容和写作要点写一封回帖。
Hi, everyone. When I take a bus, I often notice that it is very difficult for the disabled to get on or get off when they want to travel around by themselves. What should we do to help them?
要点:
1. 自己应主动帮助残疾人上下车;2. 呼吁大家共同帮助残疾人乘车;3. 建议改进公共交通设施以方便残疾人出行。注意:1. 词数100左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 参考词汇:设施 facility
【答案】
One possible version
The problem that you pointed out also gets my attention. Although we have done a lot to improve the conditions for disabled people, it is still inconvenient for disabled people to take public transportation. Here I’d like to give my suggestions for the problem.
If we see disabled people taking a bus or subway, we should make an offer to help them. In the meantime, we should call on other passengers to help them. Though these are little things, they are of great importance to the disabled. Most importantly, we should improve public transportation facilities so that it can be more convenient for disabled people to travel around.
【解析】
试题分析:某中学生英文论坛上,对残疾人乘坐公共交通工具的问题进行了讨论。有位网名叫Life-lover的网友的帖子引起了大家的关注。帖子的内容为Hi, everyone. When I take a bus, I often notice that it is very difficult for the disabled to get on or get off when they want to travel around by themselves. What should we do to help them? 请你根据帖子的内容和写作要点写一封回帖。文章中应该包括以下内容:1. 自己应主动帮助残疾人上下车;2. 呼吁大家共同帮助残疾人乘车;3. 建议改进公共交通设施以方便残疾人出行。写作时不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全,语句通顺,同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意:1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【亮点说明】The problem that you pointed out also gets my attention.固定词组的运用;Although we have done a lot to improve the conditions for disabled people, it is still inconvenient for disabled people to take public transportation.从句与固定句式相结合;Most importantly, we should improve public transportation facilities so that it can be more convenient for disabled people to travel around.此句式为文章增色,显得文章很有档次。