Question

书面表达（满分25分）

新课程实施以来，有些学校取消了晚自习，你所在的班级学生对是否取消晚自习展开了一次讨论。请结合以下讨论内容用英语写一篇短文，并发表自己的看法。

赞成观点	反对观点
1.能够给学生更多的自主学习和休息时间；2.有时间发展个人爱好。	1.相对在家自习，在校学习效率更高； 2.通过师生交流，生生交流，学习问题可以得到及时解决。
你的观点……

注意：1. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；

2. 词数：120左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Recently, our class has held a heated discussion about whether evening classes should be cancelled.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

不唯一

Recently, our class has held a heated discussion about whether evening classes should be cancelled. Opinions vary from person to person.

Some of them are in favor of the idea that the evening classes should be cancelled. To begin with,  cancelling evening classes means that they have more time for autonomous learning and resting. Besides, students will have more time to develop their hobbies such as reading, playing sports, drawing and so on.

However, others object to this idea. From their point of view, compared with studying at home, studying at school may lead to high study efficiency. What’s more, the problems existing in study can be dealt with as soon as possible by means of communicating with teachers and cooperating with classmates.

Weighing pros and cons,  I prefer studying at home because I’m willing to form the habit of being independent and I’m inclined to arrange study time myself.

【解析】

试题分析： 英语写作是一个人英语综合水平的体现。本篇写作题材是社会现象的两种不同观点。这种文章一般层次比较清晰，可分四段：第一段为总述；第二段正方观点及依据；第三段反方观点及依据；第四段自己观点。要注意的是1.在列举双方依据时要尽量使语言多样化；2.自我观点表达时要有正确的判断，要有辩证的思维。一篇文章需要有正确的句子才能明了清晰的表达作者的意思。考生应明白高考书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求的是将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确地表达意思的能力。

考点：提纲作文。

点评：考生要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，尽可能的使用较复杂的句子结构，尽量使用高级词汇以便得到较高的分数。写作是一个厚积薄发的过程，是一项将积累释放于一时的过程。积累越深厚，释放就越精彩；积累越科学，释放就越有效。