Question

书面表达

请根据下面的时间线索，介绍中国的“高空王子”阿迪力.

注意：

（1）内容应包括以上要求，可以适当增加细节，使内容连贯.

（2）词数100字左右.

（3）参考词汇：

走钢丝----wire-walk

钢丝走表演者----wirewalker

壮举----remarkable feat

吉尼斯世界记录----the Guinness world record

（4）文章的第一句已写出.

　　Adili was born on July 1,1971 in Xinjiang, China, in a family with a great tradition in acrobatics.

Answer 1

答案：
解析：

(1) 提示 1)格式：人物介绍. 2)人称：第三人称. 3)时态：一般过去时. 4)短语：give up放弃；five years old 5岁；remarkable feat壮举；the Guinness world record吉尼斯世界纪录. 5)句型和搭配： (1) Soon he began to be trained in the art of wire-walking.该句主语是动词不定式动作的承受者，且动作的执行者是他人，动词不定式应用被动式. (2) His doctor advised him not to perform again. =His doctor tried to persuade him not to perform again.此句型所表示的是劝解不一定成功，如果劝解成功须用 persuade sb. to do sth.句型.另外，不定式的否定式，否定词应置于不定式之前. (3) On May 11, 2002，Adili completed a remarkable feat by staying on a wire for 600 hours and wire-walking for a total of 123 hours and 48 minutes, breaking the Guinness world record held by a Canadian Jan Cochrane. 这是一个简单句，其句型结构比较复杂. 句中“by ＋ 动名词”表示方式或手段，在句中作方式状语；句末breaking……为现在分词短语作结果状语；held by…为过去分词短语作后置定语，修饰record. (2) 范文 Adili was born on July l,1971 in Xinjiang，China，in a family with a great tradition in acrobatics. When he was only five years old，his father died. Soon he began to be trained in the art of wire-walking. He worked very hard and decided to become the finest wirewalker in the world. In a wire-walking performance in Shanghai in 1991，his rope suddenly broke. He fell on the ground and his bones were broken at l7 different pans of his body. His doctor advised him not to perform again, but Adili refused to give up. On June 23, 1996，Adili became the first Chinese to cross a river on a wire. On May 11, 2002，Adili completed a remarkable feat by staying on a wire for 600 hours and wire-walking for a total of 123 hours and 48 minutes. breaking the Guinness world record held by a Canadian Jan Cochrane.