Question

10．Dear Sir/Madam，
I am writing with reference to the article entitled"Everything's jut perfect，thanks!"which appeared in the June issue of your magazine．Following a discussion of the article in our English class，I have been chosen to express our disagreement with some of the views contained in the article．
First of all，we find it difficult to believe that such a large number of people are satisfied with the education system and with their working conditions．This is certainly not the case here，where many people have complaints about the poor standards of education．In fact，lack of job satisfaction is known to be among the greatest causes of stress in this country．
Secondly，it certainly is not true that most people are happy with public transport，either in our cities or in the country．Furthermore，one of the most commonly heard complaints is that there are insufficient buses and trains to serve on ever-increasing population．It's a well-known fact that our public transport system is seriously under-funded and our roads are heavily crowded．And，as far as city life is concerned，a significant percentage would move if they had the opportunity．
Finally，we feel it is unrealistic of you to claim that most people have enough money to live on．Were this so，we would have none of the financial problems faced by most people and widespread poverty would not be an issue．
To conclude，we found your article to be extremely inaccurate in its assessment of living conditions．Since your magazine claims to represent students from all over the world，we look forward to reading more objective reporting in future issues．
Yours faithfully，
Mark Wiseman．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
We found your article to be extremely inaccurate in its assessment of living conditions
我们发现你的文章在其生活状况的评估是非常不准确的．
高分句型二：
Furthermore，buses and trains to serve on ever-increasing population are insufficient and that most people have enough money to live on is unrealistic．
此外，公共汽车和火车服务不断增长的人口是不够的，大多数人有足够的钱生活是不现实的．

解答 We found your article to be extremely inaccurate in its assessment of living conditions（高分句型一）．First，the number of people who are satisfied with the education system and working conditions is huge．Second，the transportation system is not that perfect．Furthermore，buses and trains to serve on ever-increasing population are insufficient and that most people have enough money to live on is unrealistic（高分句型二）．

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．