题目内容
【题目】 短文改错(共10小题;每小题l分,满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Jin Jing,
Your problem is common one among middle school students. Maybe the following advices can help you. First in all, believe in yourself. Your greatest problem is that you lack self-confidence. The first thing you must do it is to smile at your classmates. One smile speaks loud about your wish to make friends than any word. Your smile will show that you are friendly to him. Next, trying talking with a student who is as shy as you or who share the same interest as you. You can discuss your studies with a classmate and you can also talk about your hobbies. Unless anyone is in trouble, you should be ready to help him or her. Once you have confidence, you can make as many friends as possibly.
Yours,
Lily
【答案】
Dear Jin Jing,
Your problem is common one among middle school students. Maybe the following can help you. First all, believe in yourself. Your greatest problem is that you lack self-confidence. The first thing you must do is to smile at your classmates. One smile speaks about your wish to make friends than any word. Your smile will show that you are friendly to . Next, talking with a student who is as shy as you or who the same interest as you. You can discuss your studies with a classmate and you can also talk about your hobbies. anyone is in trouble, you should be ready to help him or her. Once you have confidence, you can make as many friends as .
Yours,
Lily
【解析】
第一处:common前加a common one前要用不定冠词a修饰,故在common前加a。
第二处:advices→advice advice是不可数名词,没有复数形式,故把advices改为advice。
第三处:in→of first of all是固定短语,表示"首先",故把in改为of。
第四处:it去掉 此处是定语从句,you must do修饰先行词The first thing,故把it去掉。
第五处:loud→louder 后面的"than"提示此处用比较级,故把loud改为louder。
第六处:him→them 此处指代上文中的"your
第七处:trying→try 此处为祈使句,应该用动词原形,故把trying改为try。
第八处:share→shares 定语从句的主语是who,先行词是a student,谓语动词应该用第三人称单数形式,故把share改为shares。
第九处:Unless→If 此处表示假设"如果……",故把Unless改为If。
第十处:possibly→possible as…as possible为固定搭配,表示"尽可能",故把possibly改为possible。