Question

【题目】短文改错

下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Yesterday I happened to meet a young America student in the Palace Museum. This was the first time that I has met a foreigner, so I went up and greeted him with English. He told me that he was a college student travel in China and he liked China very much. I volunteered to show him around the museum. He was deep impressed with the Chinese buildings and busy with taking photos all the time. He said never before had he seen so beautiful buildings. After that, we went boating on a lake but had a good time. I was very glad to have such a good chance to practice my speaking English.

Answer 1

【答案】

Yesterday I happened to meet a young America student in the Palace Museum. This was the first

American

time that I has met a foreigner, so I went up and greeted him with English. He told me that he

had in

was a college student travel in China and ∧ he liked China very much. I volunteered to show

traveling/travelling that

him around the museum. He was deep impressed with the Chinese buildings and busy with taking

deeply

photos all the time. He said never before had he seen so beautiful buildings. After that, we went

such

boating on a lake but had a good time. I was very glad to have such a good chance to practice

and

my speaking English.

spoken

【1】America→American

【2】has→had

【3】with →in

【4】travel→travelling/ traveling

【5】and后面加 that

【6】deep →deeply

【7】去掉with

【8】so→ such

【9】but→ and

【10】speaking →spoken

【解析】

文章大意：昨天我碰巧遇到一个外国人，我们在一起游玩，交流。他对中国的建筑非常赞赏，而且拍了很多照片。我非常高兴有这次练习口语的机会。

【1】America→American 修饰名词用形容词American。

【2】has→had 在句型“It/This was the first time that从句 ”中that从句用过去完成时，把has改为had。

【3】with →in 用某种语言，介词用in。

【4】travel→travelling/ traveling 此处是非谓语短语做定语，被修饰词student和travel之间是主动关系，用现在分词，把travel改为travelling/ traveling。

【5】and后面加 that 两个陈述句做宾语从句时第二个宾语从句中的that不能省略，故在and后面加 that。

【6】deep →deeply 此处表示“深深地”，用deeply。

【7】去掉with 固定短语：be busy doing sth 或be busy with sth，故去掉with。

【8】so→ such so不能修饰复数名词，改为such。

【9】but→ and 根据句意可知此处是顺承关系，把but改为and。

【10】speaking →spoken spoken English“口语”，把speaking改为spoken。