Question

【题目】（十）

假设你叫李华。你的表哥王平在美国留学，今年春节没有回国。他在给你的邮件中提到他非常想家，想了解你们过春节的情况。请根据以下提示用英语给他写一封回信：

1．节俭过春节，做到“光盘”用餐；

2．减少燃放鞭炮，清洁空气；

3．希望介绍国外过春节的情况。

注意：1．词数120—150。

2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：节俭的：frugal；放鞭炮：set off firecrackers。

Dear cousin，

I'm glad to hear from you．

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear cousin,

I’m glad to hear from you. It’s a pity that you didn’t come back during the Spring Festival. We all miss you too..

It's suggested to avoid the waste of food in restaurants especially during the festivals. When we eat out we usually order proper dished and avoid any waste of food. I hope this practice will last forever and spread to every corner of the world.

Because of the heavy smog of last winter throughout the whole country, there is another change in setting off firecrackers. More and more people prefer to buy and set off less firecrackers in order to have a more clear sky.

With more and more Chinese living abroad, the Spring Festival has become a global festival. I also want to know how you celebrate the traditional festival in America. I hope everything is going on well with you.

Yours, Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本书面表达是一篇提纲作文。提纲作文写作的时候注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。

【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如hear from，It’s a pity that，eat out， set off, prefer to，going on well；还运用句型it作形式主语的主语从句。并注意了句子的衔接，正确使用衔接词，如：because of，when，and，finally等等。