Question

【题目】假如你叫李华，最近你在班内进行了关于“什么因素影响你对音乐的选择”的调查，调查结果如图表所示。现在请你写一份调查报告，并针对图表中的任何一个数据所反映的情况谈谈你的看法。

Which of the following influences the music that you listen to?

影响因素

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Recently I have carried out a survey among the students in our class. The survey was made to find out what influences the music we listen to.

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Answer 1

【答案】Recently I have carried out a survey among the students in our class. The survey was made to find out what influences the music we listen to.

According to the survey, TV and films have the strongest effect on our choice of music, 50 per cent of the students sharing the opinion. 30 per cent of the students say they are influenced by friends when deciding what to listen to. Radio comes third, with 20 per cent of the students choosing it. Parents seem to have very little influence. Only about 10 per cent of the students say they listen to what their parents recommend.

In my opinion, one of the major reasons why TV and films influence our choice of music so much is that the music in the film usually goes with beautiful pictures, and expresses certain feelings of heroes. Good film music, as is often the case, can be with one for a whole life.

【解析】

该题是图表文字转换题，要求同学们分析图表中的数据，对数据反映出来的情况进行说明，并分析其原因。人称宜以第三人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主。具体写作思路如下：

第一步：审题

体裁：说明文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时

结构：总分

第二步：列提纲（重点词组）

carry out/ find out/ according to/ have an effect on/ listen to/ prefer to/ compare with/ in one’s opinion

第三步：连词成句

1. Recently a survey was carried out among the students in our class, the aim of which was to find out what influences the music we students listen to.

2. According to the survey, TV and films have the strongest effect on our choice of music, for about 50% students prefer to listen to these kinds of music.

3. 30 percent of the students say they listen to what their friends recommend.

4. Radio comes third, with 20 per cent of the students choosing it.

5. Only about 10 per cent of the students say they listen to what their parents recommend, which shows that parents have little influence on them.

6. In my opinion, one of the major reasons why TV and films are chosen is that the music in the film usually goes with beautiful pictures, and expresses certain feelings of heroes.

7. Good film music, as is often the case, can be with one for a whole life.

第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）

表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…

状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…

定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…

第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）