Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号() 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改: 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Last Friday, the English class was going on while our English teacher suddenly slip and fell off the stage, which shocked all the students.

Without hesitate, I, under the help of Tom and Mary, carried her on my back to the clinic. All the others classmates waited anxiously in the classroom. It turned out that her right leg broken and she had to stay in the hospital.

After school, we all went to see her. She told me the injury was not severe, but we hoped she would recover soon!

Three days later, we were surprised to see that she was back in a wheelchair. We were joy and deeply moved, clapping and cheering for a long time.

Answer 1

【答案】

Last Friday, the English class was going on our English teacher suddenly and fell off the stage, which shocked all the students.

Without, I, the help of Tom and Mary, carried her on my back to the clinic. All the classmates waited anxiously in the classroom. It turned out that her right legbroken and she had to stay inthehospital.

After school, we all went to see her. She told the injury was not severe, we hoped she would recover soon!

Three days later, we were surprised to see that she was back in a wheelchair. We were and deeply moved, clapping and cheering for a long time.

【解析】

【1】while改为when 考查连词辨析。while当……时（表在……期间）；when当……时（一般表瞬间，就在那时）。句意：上周五，当我们的英语老师突然滑倒的时候，正在上英语课。故while改为when。

【2】slip改为slipped 考查动词时态。根据句中时间状语last Friday可知，此处描述的是过去的动作。故slip改为slipped。

【3】hesitate改为hesitation 考查介词搭配。without为介词，其后应接名词、代词或名词化的词（组）。故hesitate改为hesitation，hesitation不可数。

【4】under改为with 考查介词搭配。with one’s help在某人的帮助下。故under改为with。

【5】others改为other 考查指代词。others=other+名词复数，表“其他的……”。故others改为other。

【6】leg和broken之间加was 考查动词语态。句意：结果她的右腿骨折了。her right leg与break之间为逻辑动宾关系，应使用被动语态且因为本文主要是过去时态。故leg和broken之间加was。

【7】in the hospital删去the 考查定冠词。固定词组：in the hospital在医院里，in hospital在住院。句意：她必须住院（治疗）。故in the hospital删去the。

【8】me改为us 考查代词。句意：她告诉我们她的伤不严重。故me改为us。

【9】but改为and 考查连词。分析前后句意可知，两句不存在转折关系，只是一般的并列。故but改为and 。

【10】joy改为joyful或joyous 考查形容词。句意：我们很快乐，并被深深地感动了。根据句意及句子成分可知，此处应使用形容词作表语。故joy改为joyful或joyous。