Question

【题目】【2015·福建】

书面表达(满分25分）

请阅读下面图画，按要求用英语写一篇词数为120左右的短文。

内容包括：

1. 描述画面；

2. 概述其含义；

3. 谈谈个人感想。

凿壁偷光

注意：

1. 短文开头已给出,不计入总词数；

2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯；

3. 短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；

参考词汇：凿，钻：bore

In the picture,

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Answer 1

【答案】

In the picture ,we can see a boy in worn clothes,sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it.A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading.

This is a well-known story from ancient Chinese idiom.The boy, being poor ,couldn’t afford even a candle,so he bored a hole in the wall to “steal” light from his neighbour ‘s house to read at night.The moral of the story is spare no effort to accquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be

Of course, things are totally different today It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts.Hard work pays off.We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get perpared for the future.

【解析】

试题分析：本题为看图写作，主题是古时候的一则成语“凿壁偷光”。注意条理要清晰，逻辑顺序和结构要恰当，同时要尽量保持简洁精干的内容，不拖泥带水。要注意题中所给的信息，不可偏题，应用文写作对于文章内容的要求是要达到写作目的。尽量保持卷面整洁，字体美观，注意行文的连贯性。

【亮点分析】

文章第一段描述图片，第一句中用到了动词ing形式的非谓语动词做伴随状语和with 的复合结构In the picture ,we can see a boy in worn clothes,sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it.图中我们可以看见一个男孩穿着破旧的衣服坐在一个堆满书的桌子旁边。A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading.一丝微弱的光亮从墙上的一个小洞穿过，他沉静在自己的阅读中。

第二段第一句开始说这个图片的主题。This is a well-known story from ancient Chinese idiom.这是一个众人周知的中国古代成语。第二句也是用了一个分词结构表示伴随状语The boy, being poor ,couldn’t afford even a candle,so he bored a hole in the wall to “steal” light from his neighbour ‘s house to read at night.这个贫穷的男孩甚至不能够买得起一根蜡烛，于是他把墙凿了一个洞，从他邻居那里偷了一些光在夜晚阅读。第二段最后一句用了一个no matter引导的让步状语从句。The moral of the story is spare no effort to accquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be.故事的精神是要不遗余力的获取知识，并且不管有多么困难的情况从不轻易气馁。

第三段结束Of course, things are totally different today .当然，现在可完全不同了。第二句是一个not… but 结构以及宾语从句It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts.不是这个故事本身而是这个故事反映出来的东西才是重要的。俗语：Hard work pays off.功夫不负有心人。We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get perpared for the future.我们应该带着苦来通过学习来改进自己并且为未来做准备。