题目内容
【题目】短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
An old couple in the seventies loved traveling. Every time they went away, they always left any money and a note on the table for a potential thief. This time they are taking a two-month trip to Guangdong to celebrate this year Spring Festival. They left a note which says, "I know you have suffered a lot this year. You must eager to go home to see your parents. Please take the money and buy a ticket. " In fact, a thief did break in a few years ago .He took out the money butleft everything else untouching. When asked how they did so, the husband said, "I believe people are born kindly .We should reach out a helping hand when somebody is in trouble.”
【答案】
An old couple in the seventies loved traveling. Every time they went away, they always left
their
any money and a note on the table for a potential thief. This time they are taking a two-month
some were
trip to Guangdong to celebrate this year Spring Festival. They left a note which says, "I know you
year’s said
have suffered a lot this year. You must∧ eager to go home to see your parents. Please take the
be
money and buy a ticket. " In fact, a thief did break in a few years ago .He took out the money but
left everything else untouching. When asked how they did so, the husband said, "I
untouched. why
believe people are born kindly .We should reach out a helping hand when somebody is in trouble.”
kind
【1】第一句 the---their
【2】第二句 any---some
【3】第三句are---were
【4】第三句 year—year’s
【5】第四句 says---said
【6】第五句 在must后面加be
【7】第八句 把out去掉
【8】第八句 untouching—untouched
【9】第九句how—why
【10】第十句kindly—kind
【解析】
【1】第一句 the---their 考查固定短语。 In one’s seventies“在某人70岁的时候”，故把the改为their。
【2】第二句 any---some 考查代词的用法。这里是肯定意思，指留下一些钱，故把any改为some。
【3】第三句are---were 考查动词时态。 文章讲述过去的事情，应该用过去进行时表示将来，故把are改为were。
【4】第三句 year—year’s 考查名词所有格。此处指今年的春节，是所有关系，故把year改为year’s。
【5】第四句 says---said 考查动词时态。此处定语从句应该用过去时，故把says改为said。
【6】第五句 在must后面加be。考查系动词。情态动词后面跟动词原形，eager是形容词，故在eager前加be。
【7】第八句 把out去掉 考查副词。此处指拿了钱就走了，而take out意思是“拿出”，故去掉out。
【8】第八句 untouching—untouched 考查过去分词。此处是“leave+宾语+补语”结构，untouch和宾语everything else之间是被动关系，应该用过去分词，故把untouching改为untouched。
【9】第九句how—why 考查连词。从句意可知此处是问原因，故把how改为why。
【10】第十句kindly—kind 考查形容词。Be born+形容词或者名词，表示“天生….”，故把kindly改为kind。
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