Question

【题目】假如你叫李华，你就读的学校是一所历史悠久的学校，校园环境优美，教师经验丰富，教室宽敞明亮，教学设备先进，图书馆有大量藏书，你对这一切都很满意，但是，学校要求住校生每天早晨5:30起床锻炼，为此同学们议论纷纷，请你用e-mail向校长阐述你赞成或反对的理由。词数100左右。电子邮件的开头和落款已给出，不计入总词数。

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Date:	September 18	From:	Li Hua	To:	Headmaster	Subject:	Advice
Dear Sir, I am very honoured to study in our school, which is famous and has a long history. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours tryly, Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir,

I am very honoured to study in our school, which is famous and has a long history. There are lots of evergreen trees on the beautiful campus. We have many experienced teachers who are kind, enthusiastic and easy-going. There are many spacious and bright classrooms with a lot of advanced teaching equipment in the teaching building. In the school library, there are a large number of books we can borrow twice a week. I am amazed and satisfied with all these. But the students living at school have to get up early to take exercise. I don’t think it’s a good idea. If we get up so early, we’ll feel sleepy in class. In fact, it’s necessary for us students to have enough sleep. What’s more, from morning to night we have little time to arrange our own life. We know health is the first wealth, but we can do more to keep fit in our spare time instead of getting up early for exercise.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【解析】

本文要求同学们写一封电子邮件，内容是赞成或反对学校让学生早起锻炼并阐述理由。同学们在写作时要求做到格式规范、论据充分。具体写作思路如下：

第一步：审题

体裁：说明文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时

结构：总分

第二步：列提纲（重点词组）

be honored to do sth/ has a long history/ experienced/ kind and enthusiastic/ advanced teaching equipment/ a large number of/ have access to/ take exercise/ be satisfied with/ have enough sleep/ keep fit/ feel sleepy

第三步：连词成句

1. I am very honored to study in our school, which is famous and has a long history.

2. There are lots of evergreen trees on the beautiful campus.

3. We have many experienced teachers who are kind, enthusiastic and easy-going.

4. There are many spacious and bright classrooms with a lot of advanced teaching equipment in the teaching building.

5. In the school library, there are a wide range of books, which are accessible to all the students.

6. I am satisfied with all these.

7. However, the students who lives at school have to get up early to take exercise.

8. I don’t think it’s a good idea.

9. Getting up so early will make us feel sleepy in class.

10. As a matter of fact, it’s important for us students to have enough sleep.

11. What’s more, from morning to night we are busy, having little time to arrange our own life.

12. We know health is the first wealth, but we can do more to keep fit in our spare time instead of getting up early for exercise.