题目内容
【题目】书面表达(满分15分)
请对自己的未来进行设想和预测,未来你的工作和生活会是怎样的?以 My Future 为题写一篇文章。
书写要求:1. 要求意思连贯、表达准确,词数不少于80词左右
2. 可根据具体要求适当发挥;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名。
My Future
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【答案】 My Future
My name is kelly. In 15 years, I think I will be tall, strong and have long hair. I’ll live in Shanghai,.because it’s really a modern city and I like it very much. I’ll be a reporter in the future. As a reporter, I will travel all over the world. So I will meet a lot of interesting people. I also will visit lots of great places. In my free time, I will go swimming. It’s good for my health. And of course, I will have a happy family.
【解析】
试题分析:本文属于话题短文,介绍我们想象中的未来生活。因为介绍的是未来的生活,所以文章使用一般将来时,人称第一人称为主。文章最好写成两部分,第一部分谈谈未来的生活工作,第二部分发表自己的个人感想。考生应该用自己最有把握的句型、单词、短语去表达,要尝试用复合句,如定语从句、同位语从句等,但句式不要单一,要形式多样,要使用恰当的连词,使句与句之间,段与段之间过渡自然。在写作过程中牢牢记住以下口诀:“先读提示,要点与格式要弄清;时态语态要当心,前后呼应要一致,结构搭配莫违背;文章写好细检查,点滴小错别忽视”。
写作亮点:该文以话题要点为依据,进行适当的拓展,遣词造句方面注意词组和语法的使用:because “因为”,all over the world. “全世界”,in the future “在未来”,be good for “对……有好处”, And of course “当然”。
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