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根据中文设置的情景和英文提示词语，写出语法正确，意思连贯，符合逻辑的英文文段．

所给的英文提示词语必须都用上，中文提示内容不必逐字翻译．(字数60～80)提示：假如你是李雷，现在你给你的英国朋友Jim写一封信，告诉他你和同学们上周日去香山公园郊游的活动的感受．信的开头和结尾已给出．

你们早上七点钟在学校门口集合，大约八点钟到达香山公园……

meet, arrive, at the foot of the hill, have a party, play games, climb, on the top of, see, how, beautiful, feel proud(自豪的), live Beijing, the 2008 Olympic Games, hold

　　Dear Jim,

　　Last Sunday my classmates and I want to Xiangshan Park, I hope we will meet in Beijing in 2008. Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Lei

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学生：习作： 　　Dear Jim, 　　Last Sunday my classmates and I went to Xiangshan Park, we met at school gate at 7:00 in the morning. We arrived at the foot of the hill at about 8:00. We have a party(X1) and play games(X2) after we climbed the hill. On the top of the hill, I have a wonderful view(X3). How beautiful Beijing is! I felt proud because I live(X4) Beijing. And the 2008 Olympic games hold(X5) in Beijing. 　　I hope we will meet in Beijing in 2008. 　　Best wishes! Yours, Li Lei 　　剖析：1．有了过去的时间状语last Sunday动词应该用一般过去时，所以have→had． 　　4．live为不及物动词，不能跟宾语Beijing，因此要在live后加in． 　　5．此处为一般将来时的被动语态，应改为will be held． 　　剖析：文章只写明了大部分要点，语言有一些错误，但仍能达意，行文基本连贯．