Question

【题目】书面表达

下面是大明写给他的朋友Tom的信，信中描述了他的烦恼。请你以他的朋友Tom的身份，给他写一封60词左右的回信，在信中指出他的问题并给他提出建议。信的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Tom,

My classmate Lucy, bought a new pen. I liked it very much, so I used it without her permission. Unluckily, I broke it. Then I put it back secretly( ). Now she finds out the truth( ) and is very angry with me. I don’t know what to do. Can you help me?

Yours,

Daming

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Daming,

I know your problem. You’ve made two mistakes. First, you used your classmate’s pen without her permission. Second, when you broke the pen, you didn’t tell her the truth. Yes, you must tell her immediately. If you tell her the truth, perhaps she’ll be angry with you, but at least you’ll prove you are honest.

Then I think you should offer to pay. You can use your pocket money to buy a new pen for her. She will realize that you’re truly sorry.

I hope the advice can help you. I’m sure you will make up with her soon.

Yours,

Tom

【解析】

试题分析：提出Tom的错误，并提出意见。错误一定要清楚，建议要实用。时态涉及一版现在时和一般过去时。

写作亮点：文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，例如perhaps she’ll be angry with you, but at least you’ll prove you are honest.;Then I think you should offer to pay. You can use your pocket money to buy a new pen for her. 文章层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。