Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你们班要举办一次有关“学生该不该做家务”的讨论会，请你根据以下提示的问题写一篇短文，阐述自己的观点。词数：80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

提示：

1. Do you often do chores?

2. What chores do you often do?

3. What do you think of doing chores?

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Answer 1

【答案】

Hello, everyone! Now let me say something about myself. I usually do chores at home. I often sweep the floor, do some washing and clean the rooms. On weekends, I often help my mother do some cooking.

I think we should do some chores at home. Most parents are busy and they are tired after work. So we should try our best to help them. And we can learn a lot from doing chores, too.

Thank you for your listening!

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。本文主要介绍自己的观点，因此一般现在时运用较多。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。当然，写作时尤要注意文章结构的合理，表述的条理性和准确性。

温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：该范文结构清晰，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯。尤为突出之处在短语和句子的巧妙运用，如do chores；sweep the floor；do some washing；try one’s best to do；On weekends, I often help my mother do some cooking；Most parents are busy and they are tired after work等这些短语和句子的运用也让文章增色不少。学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。