Question

【题目】书面表达 （20分）

根据表格内容，写一篇英语短文。80词左右

Name	Problems	Should	Shouldn’t
Alice	tired	go to bed early	go to the party tonight
Alan	cut his knee	put a bandage	play soccer
Gina	have a nosebleed	put her head down	jump up and down
Tony	hurt his leg playing basketball	get an X—ray	walk to the hospital
Julie	have a toothache	brush her teeth every day	eat candy before sleep

Alice is tired. She should go to bed early, and she shouldn’t go to the party tonight.

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Alice is tired. She should go to bed early, and she shouldn’t go to the party tonight. Alan cut his knee. He should put a bandage and he shouldn’t play soccer. Gina has a nosebleed. She should put her head down, and she shouldn’t jump up and down. Tony hurts his leg playing basketball. He should get an X-ray, and he shouldn’t walk to the hospital. Julie has a toothache. She should brush her teeth every day, and she shouldn’t eat candy before sleep.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍五个人的不同身体问题以及他们应该做的事和不应该做的事。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构。注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：She should ...., he shouldn’t...., Julie has...以及she shouldn’t......等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意文后要完整地表达出表格中所列的内容。

【写作亮点】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。本文依次介绍了Alice, Alan, Gina, Tony和Julie的身体问题，并对他们的问题给出的建议，他们应该做的和不应该做的。此处go to bed, jump up and down,get an X-ray, brush her teeth 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。