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5．近几年，越来越多的中国人出国旅游，他们中的一些不文明行为引起了人们的极大关注．调查显示，中国游客列世界第二不受欢迎的人．为此，请你根据以下要点，给校报英语专栏写一篇短文，并提出你的建议，呼吁人们文明出行．
1．不高声喧哗；
2．排队候车或就餐；
3．不随地吐痰或乱扔垃圾；
4．不乱涂乱画．
注意：1．词数：80 词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2．应覆盖所有要点；可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3．参考词汇：spit v．吐痰；behavior n．行为．
With more and more Chinese people traveling abroad，their bad behaviors have become a hot topic．A recent US survey showed Chinese were the second worst tourists．How can we be a good tourist？Here are some tips for you．First，we should keep our voice down while talking with friends in public places．Please wait in line if you want to take a bus or have dinner．Also，don't spit or drop litter whenever you want．Finally，it's really bad behavior to write or draw pictures on famous buildings．As a middle school student，I think we should pay attention to our behavior，saying no to those bad habits．While enjoying ourselves，we should not only respect local customs，but also take care of the environment．．

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分析 根据提示要点，可以知道，这是要求写一篇议论文，谈论一下目前比较突出的一种现象，因为是辨析现实，所以写作时用一般现在时态就可以，这篇作文我们要从以下几个要点入手写作：1．不文明现象的出现（已经给出）．2．应该如何文明出行（4条）3．提出期望或呼吁．

解答 With more and more Chinese people traveling abroad，their bad behaviors have become a hot topic．A recent US survey showed Chinese were the second worst tourists．How can we be a good tourist？Here are some tips for you．First，we should keep our voice down while talking with friends in public places．Please wait in line if you want to take a bus or have dinner．Also，don't spit or drop litter whenever you want．Finally，it's really bad behavior to write or draw pictures on famous buildings．As a middle school student，I think we should pay attention to our behavior，saying no to those bad habits．While enjoying ourselves，we should not only respect local customs，but also take care of the environment．

点评 以提纲提供情景的作文．要注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，就不会造成审题不清而偏离主题，但要注意，文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点．行文间要注意简化描述，用简短的语句代替冗长的语句．在作文完成的时候，应该检查、修改，以免遗漏一些需要表达清楚的要点和细节．