题目内容

 请你以“My spare time “ 为题,描述自己的课余生活。要求60-----80个单词。

    提示词;be interested in ; be good at , be busy with ,weekends ,enjoy ,like, spend  --in

 

【答案】

 

   I’m interested in playing computer games .I’m good at swimming and playing basketball , but I have no time .From Monday to Friday ,I am busy with my study and do much homework both in the daytime and in the evening .So I have my spare time only on weekends . In the afternoon, I usually spend most of time in playing with my friends . Sometimes I help my parents with housework. In the evening, I often go to moves, My favourite moves are Superman and Spiderman, I want to be a hero to help people in the future .

【解析】

试题分析:本文的题目是my spare time,介绍自己的课余生活,也就是介绍学习之外从事的活动,范围比较广泛。书写时,注意根据时间来安排课余活动,不要用排比性的句型泛泛谈论,要切中主题。书写时,要注意人称应该用第一人称,而时态应该用一般现在时。还应该注意连词的应用等。

【亮点说明】本书面表达书写能按照时间的顺序来安排,使得整篇文章比较有条理,思路也很清晰。文中能正确运用所给的提示词,并且,书写时注意了,句子之间的衔接,运用了一些必要的连词如but、so等。一些句型运用的也很到位,如 My favourite moves are Superman and Spiderman, I want to be a hero to help people in the future 等这些都为文章添色不少。

考点:考查话题作文。

 

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