Question

书面表达

提示：你的加拿大朋友Danny,也是一位中学生，他希望了解你将如何度过这个暑假。为此，你把你的想法写成短文，然后再发e-mail 给他。暑假生活包括以下内容：

1.坚持锻炼身体；2.根据个人兴趣和需要安排学习；3.帮助家人做家务。

要求：1.暑假生活除必须写以上3项内容外，其他活动（1~2项）可适当发挥。2.词数：100左右。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Summer holiday is coming at once.During the holiday,the first thing I’ll do is to get relaxed after the examinations to enter the senior middle school.I’ll go on doing morning exercises every day.In the afternoon I’ll go fishing in the river if I’m free.I like playing the computer a lot.So I’m going to surf the Internet and try to find some useful information.I like reading.So I’d like to spend some time reading books.My Chinese is a little weak.So I’m going to read more books on Chinese than on any other subjects.On the other hand I’ll help my parents do some housework as much as possible.I’d like to visit some of my friends and relatives as well.

I’m sure I will have a good time this summer.

【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，作者在写作中运用将来时态，叙述了即将到来暑假里的计划和打算，暑假生活安排的丰富多彩，除了要求必须写的之外，还是当发挥，使得文章内容更加充实，生动，语句流畅，通顺，符合逻辑。