题目内容
【题目】书面表达。(共计10分)
最近你校校园网上出现了一个英语帖子,意在了解同学们在体育爱好、艺术特长等方面的情况,请你用“李华”这一网名,根据以下三个提示回贴。
提示:(1)What’s your favorite …?
(2)What do you often do in your spare time?
(3)What’s your advice to your teacher or school so that you can improve your skill?
要求:(1)回帖中须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥。
(2)回帖中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
(3)词数:60~80个。
Li Hua, 11:00 Apr.16
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【答案】I like sports and my favorite sport is basketball. Every day I practice basketball with my classmates after school. I also enjoy listening to music but I can’t sing well. I’m afraid to sing in front of people. I hope our school will start a singing club. I’m sure I can make great progress with the help of our teachers. I also hope there will be less homework on weekends. Then I can have more time to do what I’m interested in.
【解析】
试题分析: 这是篇提纲类作文。写作前一定要审清题目,对于题目中所提出的三个要点内容不能有遗漏。通过审题可得知这篇作文要用第一人称写,用一般现在时。各要点可以适当发挥,使文章内容能更充实。另外文章中可适当使用一些连接词,使其更流畅。
写作亮点: 这篇文章要点齐全,表述准确,流畅,结构清楚明了。文章中使用了很多短语,例如:in front of在……前面,make great progress取得巨大进步,have more time to do有更多时间做某事,等等。文中也使用了很多连词,如and, but, also等,使文章结构更紧凑,表达更流畅。此外,文中使用了一些从句,如Then I can have more time to do what I’m interested in. what引导了一个宾语从句。
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