Question

为了使同学们更加健康快乐地成长，学校决定向同学们征求建议。假如你是王波，请用英语向校长写一篇建议信。

内容包括：	Suggestions for a Better School Life
	学校	老师
	﹡常开放图书馆 ﹡组织更多课后活动 ﹡给予我们更多的运动时间 ﹡少组织考试 ﹡﹍﹍	﹡让课堂更有趣 ﹡课堂上说得更简单明了一些 ﹡准时下课 ﹡布置少一点作业 ﹡﹍﹍

作文要求：
文中应包含所有要点，并适当发挥。语句连贯，80词左右。
不能在作文中出现真实的校名和姓名。作文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear headmaster,
I’m very glad to write a letter to you. These days we are talking about how to have a better school life. Here are some of my suggestions. First, I hope our school will                  
                                                                              
Hope my suggestions will be helpful. Thanks for reading my letter!
Yours sincerely,
Wang Bo

Answer 1

Dear headmaster,
I’m very glad to write a letter to you. These days we are talking about how to have a better school life. Here are some of my suggestions. First, I hope our school will open the library more often. Second, I think our school can organize more after-class activities. Next I hope our school will give us more time for sports, art and music. And I suggest our school should organize fewer exams as well.
As for our teachers, I hope they will be our friends and make classes more interesting. And if they can talk less but more clearly in class, we will be more interested in studying and have more time to practice. What’s more, I hope they will give us less homework and finish classes on time.
Hope my suggestions will be helpful. Thanks for reading my letter!
Yours sincerely,
Wang Bo

解析这是一封建议信，开头结尾已经给出了，就把要点写全就可以了，要点是以表格的形式给出的，所以审题时，表格是重点，表格分两部分，一是给校长的建议，还有是给老师的建议，要用学过的句型表达清楚，除了列出的建议，还要求学生自由发挥写出建议，要求比按要点写更难点，要求用自己的语言组织。还要注意使用一些关联词，使文章更连贯。象这篇范文里的，first，second，next，what’s more。