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假如你是新华中学一名初三毕业生。请根据以下要点给某英文报写一篇英语短文,谈谈你对初三生活的看法。
(1)对获得的帮助表示感谢;
(2)对将来生活的规划;
(3)对学弟、学妹的建议。
注意:1.词数90左右;
2.短文的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数;
3.短文须包括所有内容要点;可适当发挥,使其通顺、连贯;
4.短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Junior school is regarded as a best time in a person's life. As a junior 3 student, it won't take long before I graduate.___________________________________________________________
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Junior school is regarded as a best time in a person’s life. As a junior 3 student, it won’t take long before I graduate. Now, I have much to share with my fellow students.
Firstly, I would like to show my appreciation to those standing by me all the way, including teachers, parents and friends. Without their help and advice, my life would be different.
Secondly, I’ve made up my mind to make every effort to study at senior school, for I believe hard work is the key to success. Meanwhile exercise and recreational activities are also needed. Life without sunshine and laughter is sure to be a failure.
Finally I hope that all the younger fellows always keep your dream in mind so that you will be highly motivated all the time. Even if sometimes you are in trouble, tell yourself tomorrow holds the miracle. Just one more day may be all it will take to realize your dream.
试题分析:本篇书面表达应包括三方面内容:(1)对获得的帮助表示感谢;(2)对将来生活的规划;(3)对学弟、学妹的建议。写作中应注意文章的层次脉络以及时态。准确运用一般过去时、一般将来时和一般现在时等。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒:考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,准确运用时态。文章层次清楚,衔接连贯,运用firstly, secondly, finally,meanwhile等衔接词。本文中运用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少。如:make up one’s mind, make every effort, key to success等。同时,文章还用了被动语态。
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近几年,扬州变化很大,成功创建了全国文明城市(National Civilized City)。假如你叫李磊,作为中学生的你一方面因为扬州可喜的变化感到自豪,另一方面也看到了作为一个全国文明城市还需要进一步改进的地方。在此,你向谢市长写一封信反映这些情况并提出你的一些建议。
变化
1. 人民生活很大改善;
2. 出行越来越方便;
3. ……                
问题
1. 学校附近的道路拥挤
2.. 部分市民不排队上车
3. ……
建议
…… (至少三点)
要   求:1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2)必须包括表格中所有的相关信息,并适当发挥;
3)词数:100词左右(征文的开头已给出,不计入总词数);
4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Dear Mayor Xie,
I really hope that you can read my letter. Yangzhou has built herself into a national civilized city. As a citizen of Yangzhou, I feel proud of it. To make Yangzhou a better city, I want to do something for it.
I’m amazed that great changes have taken place in our city in the past few years._________
                                                                     
                                                                     
I hope my letter is of some help to improve Yangzhou and make it a better city in the future.
Yours sincerely,
Li Lei
现在的学生纷纷感到功课多,学习负担重,压力大,内心烦恼,于是不少学生特别是留守孩子(left-behind children)迷上网络,在网上打游戏(computer game),QQ聊天,写博客(Blog),发微信(Wechat),交网友(Internet friend),等等。由于不能把握好利弊,消耗很多时间,导致学习成绩下滑,结果更加烦恼……。你认为怎样放松才合适呢?请你根据提示,以Learn to relax yourself 为题写一篇短文。
写作要点提示:
1. 学生压力大及其表现;
2. 学会放松很重要;
3. 最适合我的放松方式;
4. 我的建议。  
写作要求:
短文的内容应包含所提示要点,语言要流畅,意思连贯,适当增加情节;短文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名及地名;短文词数在90词左右。                        
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有许多同学在学校就餐时存在不同程度的浪费食物的现象,对此请你根据以下要点,以Don’t waste any more为标题写一篇80词左右的英语短文,呼吁大家加入“光盘行动”,节约粮食,防止浪费。开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
1. 许多同学没意识到节约的重要性;2. 实现伟大中国梦需要我们厉行节约。3. 有些同学喜欢买许多食物,餐盘里剩得多也就倒了,甚至到处乱扔。4. 全世界还有许多人生活艰辛,缺乏食物,甚至有些孩子死于饥饿。5. 我们应养成好习惯,加入“光盘行动”。
参考词汇:“Clear Your Plate” Campaign 光盘行动;leave…on the plate(留……在盘里);pour…into(倒进……);rubbish can(垃圾桶);take an active part积极行动起来。
Don’t Waste Any More
Food is important to us. It’s everyone’s duty to save food. ____________________________
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