Question

假如你是Jane ， 请以My School Life为题写一段短文。开头已给出，要求词数60左右
提示词：interesting , classes begin , favorite subject , after school , play basketball , get home , have dinner , watch TV , go to bed
Hi. I am Jane.                                                           
                                                                      
                                                                      
                                                                        

Answer 1

My School Life
I am Jane. My school life is very interesting. My classes begin at 7:00. My favorite subject is English because my English is very kind and friendly. We like him. After school, we usually play basketball with my classmates on the playground. I get home at 17:00. I have dinner with my family at 19:00. When I finish my homework, I watch TV. About21:00, I go to bed. I am very happy every day.

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第一人称，注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中正确使用比较形式，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】本文很好地完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖所有内容要点；应用了较丰富的语法结构和词汇；用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚，没有或基本没有语言错误；书写工整；字数符合要求。完全达到了预期的写作目的。