Question

情景作文（1个大题；满分10分）
根据提示和要求，写一篇短文。将短文写在答题卡情景作文空白处。
假设你的名字是李华,给你新认识的朋友Jim 发个E-mail ,介绍你自己的基本情况（年龄，学习的学校．班级，爱好，家庭情况等,至少写出5个完整的句子）E-mail的开头与结尾已给出。
Dear Jim ，
I would like to tell you something about myself.
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
Yours，
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Jim ，
I would like to tell you something about myself. I am a student. I am thirteen years old . I am in Class One , Grade One in  No. 2  Middle School in Yongzhou.  I like English very much . I think you can help me with my English .  There are four people in my family . My father is an office worker and my mother is a Chinese teacher . My sister is a student, too. She is in Grade Two. I have a happy family .  Let’s  be good friends and help each other .
Please write soon.
All the best !
Yours，
Li Hua

试题分析: 这是一篇应用文写作，写一封电子邮件，介绍自己的基本情况。本题只给出了写作要点，动笔前要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，确定时态、句式、关键单词等问题。然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一人称，一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
点评：注意写作中的时态、人称和数的问题，时态一般是一般现在时态，人称是第一人称较多。写作中语言要准确、简明，说明有条理，符合逻辑。