书面表达根据所给表格提示.比较两个城市.写一篇短文.BeijingHangzhouLocationNorthSouthClimatehot/coldwarmPopulation17 million6 millionPlaces of interest The Forbidden City紫荆城West Lake 西湖要求:1.字数不少于80-100个词. 2.语句通顺.表达流� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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根据所给表格提示，比较两个城市，写一篇短文。

	Beijing	Hangzhou
Location(位置)	North	South
Climate(气候)	hot/cold	warm
Population	17 million	6 million
Places of interest (名胜)	The Forbidden City紫荆城	West Lake 西湖

要求：1.字数不少于80-100个词。 2.语句通顺，表达流畅。

I’m very glad to tell you something about Beijing and Hangzhou.

One possible version：

Beijing locates in the north of China,which is one of the big cities in our country. The population is quite large, which is 17 million. The weather of this city is totally different in summer and winter,in summer it is very hot, while people will feel very cold in winter. are also a large number of places of interest in Beijing, for example, the forbidden city is the palace of the emperor in the past.

Compared to Beijing,Hangzhou is in the south of China, and there are only 6 million people in this city, which accounts for a little proportion. The weather here is very comfortable, as it is always warm all the year.The West Lake is one of places of interest in Hangzhou.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍北京和杭州这两个城市的位置、气候、人口和名胜。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：which is…，The weather of this city is …，while people will…，as it is…等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意完整表达出表格中所列内容。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了北京的位置、气候，接下来介绍北京的名胜，最后介绍杭州的位置、气候和名胜。此处in the north of，places of interest ，accounts for这些词组的运用以及定语从句which is one of the big cities in our country和which is 17 million.和运用也让文章增色不少。

考点：提纲作文。

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